Make your content & offers more persuasive

Paste an existing post, ad copy or offer and get clear feedback on what makes customers hesitate, plus two stronger rewrites.

Many sales posts are not bad; they simply give customers no reason to trust you or decide now: they talk about features instead of benefits, show a price with nothing to compare it with, or have sold thousands of jars without mentioning it. The Make your content & offers more persuasive skill solves exactly this. Paste your post, send a screenshot or drag a file into the chat. This skill points out each sentence that weakens the post, selects a few buying psychology principles that fit your customers, then rewrites it in two different directions.

What this skill does for you

• Reads content from pasted text, screenshots of posts or ads, Word files, PDFs or text files.
• Finds 3–5 points that weaken the post and quotes the exact original sentence: a bland opening, too many choices, missing proof or a vague call to action.
• Selects the 2–4 most suitable principles (real customer praise, price anchoring, fear of loss, fewer choices, an easy first step, reciprocity...) and explains why they fit this customer and product.
• Rewrites 2 versions in two different directions, keeping the length and tone close to the original.
• Lists each change below each version, one per line: what was changed and why.
• Works for Fanpage posts, ad copy, text on sales pages, marketplace descriptions, bundle offers and order-closing messages.

Assign the task with just one message

"Make this ad more persuasive. I want customers to message us to order: 'XYZ natural-extract moisturizer, leaves skin soft and smooth. Price: 250k. Inbox the shop.' Real information: more than 900 jars sold on Shopee, 4.8 stars, 7-day returns for irritation, 2-jar bundle 450k."

If you leave out the product or what you want customers to do, you will be asked once, with up to 3 short questions combined. If minor details are missing, the post will still be written, with [...] for you to fill in.

What you get back

• Right in the chat: a list of weak points with the original sentences, recommended principles, two rewrites ready to paste on Facebook or a marketplace (plain text, no formatting symbols), and a list of changes below each version.
• At the end: anything you need to fill in and a suggestion to run both versions side by side to see which performs better, when suitable.

Example of an explained change (one line): "Add '2-jar bundle 450k, which works out to 225k per jar' right after the single-jar price of 250k → customers have a clear comparison and can see that buying two is better value."

What makes this skill different from a typical AI question

• Uses only the numbers and praise you provide. It does not make up buyer counts, reviews, experts or press coverage. If you have no real numbers yet, it uses [...] and clearly says that real numbers are needed.
• No manipulation. No fake scarcity, self-resetting countdown timers, fake original prices, wording that shames customers for refusing, or health scare tactics.

• Checks by industry. Removes absolute claims without documentation; cosmetics do not say "treat" or "cure"; health supplements keep the exact phrase "this is not a medicine".
• Fewer principles, used in the right places. It does not cram every tactic into one post; each principle must have a reason connected to your customers.

This is a good fit if

• Your post gets likes but few people message to buy or book.
• Your ad costs money but brings in very few messages.
• You have a good bundle, service package or offer but do not know how to present it so customers see the value.
• Customers often reply "let me think about it" to your order-closing messages.

What to prepare

• Required: the content to revise (pasted text, screenshot or .txt, .md, .docx, .pdf file) and the content type.
• Recommended: what you want customers to do after reading.
• Highly recommended: real information you already have: number sold, genuine praise, return policy, offer deadline and remaining quantity.

Outside this skill's scope

• It does not write a new post from scratch → use Write a Fanpage post. To create a full sales page → use Build a sales page (landing page).
• It does not change your product information, prices or policies, and does not criticize other brands.
• It does not post or send content on its own, and does not include customers' names or phone numbers without their consent.
• To know for sure which version sells better → use Design an A/B test.

Use it in Solo Agent

After purchasing, assign this skill to an existing staff member on your team, or create a new staff member to handle it. One staff member can have multiple skills; the assistant sends each request to the person with the right skill.

Often used with: Write a Fanpage post · Design an A/B test · Check for violations before posting